Like most writers, I've had a lot of lame workshops in the past. And I'm not even talking about the classroom kind.
In a poetry class in college, we had assigned small groups. We were supposed to spend our Thursday session out in the world, sharing our poems with each other, talking passionately about craft and writing we love in a very "non-workshoppy" way. It was a great concept by the class teacher, Ken Mikolowski, one meant to make the community piece of a vibrant poetic life as meaningful for us young folks as it is for him.
Unfortunately, I didn't get much out of hanging around with my group. One fellow rarely showed up. Two others had the passion, but had trouble delivering anything but compliments, or, if on the rare occasion they didn't like something, they offered the vaguest of vague lines: "I just didn't find it satisfying." I didn't like the poems I read from that group very much, which made it hard to feel engaged in supporting the writer to make them better. I don't think that mattered much, because I'm not sure the writers cared much beyond the first draft. And I didn't feel like being the asshole who dared be specifically negative.
Not that I had it all together. It was hard for me to muster the energy to try very hard on any poems or revisions for the group. I distinctly remember taking a few lyrical passages of my stories, inserting line breaks in them, calling them poems, and passing them to the group for feedback I didn't care about.
I had another workshop with a couple pals in Boston. A fiction one, which instantly engaged me more. Well, two of us wrote fiction. The other wrote poems.
Ah, a classic set-up: bright lights, big city, Tuesday evenings in coffee shops to talk writing and make lists of book recommendations in my Moleskine. I had more fun, because I liked these cats, but this workshop fizzled out too. Something felt forced--we all liked to write, we were friends, therefore we should be naturals to critique each other's work, right? That assumption was wrong; we just weren't as invested in what each other was trying to do in order to be much help. The hyper-politeness of my past poetry group was blessedly not there, but neither was the passion that makes this sort of thing take off.
I tried a couple rounds using Craig's List to connect with other fiction writers. That turned out exactly how you think it turned out.
But now. Now.
I have one that works. I have one that's as exciting as those I jealously heard others tell of.
It's with six gals I know from my MFA progam. Most of us got going last February; there was one who had to step out, two others who stepped in. We send out our stories to each other on the 1st of the month, returning stories with line-editing and letters on the 21st; it's a pattern familiar to us from our program and, happily, that means we have a common basis for the thoroughness and care expected in our editing. There are times when one of us steps out for a month; there are times when we send something longer than the (very general) guideline of 20 pages.
While standard workshop etiquette is to avoid being prescriptive, we have come to embrace it; we are all strong enough as writers to take the feedback for what it is. I for one have loved hearing alternative visions or ideas for my work. My response to it helps me gauge where to take the story at hand.
The magic of this group is that I have enormous admiration for the stories I'm reading; I am downright excited to help imagine how they can move forward. This sets up a basis of trust for the responses I get back on my stories. And over time, it's been interesting to get long-view feedback. What are my patterns, for better and worse?
We're also considering using Skype or another tool to continue
conversations that have come up in our letters--about race in fiction,
for example, or about managing narrative disorientation.
Today, I got back responses on a story of mine called "On Being the Daughter of a Man in Prison." I've been knocking around with this story for ages. One of it's trademarks is its manipulation of point-of-view; it moves between first- and second-person. But I've struggled in making the transitions have the impact I want them to have--to be noticed, but not be bewildering; to resonate, but not diminish all the other stuff going on in the story.
I sent a draft of this story to the group earlier on, and by god if I didn't take a big step forward with a story that's stagnated in my own bewilderment of how to work out its problems. This month I sent the revision--to a smaller section of our workshop, as the gals who are still students at Warren Wilson College were down in North Carolina for the MFA residency.
They pointed out the places where my POV switches aren't quite in line with my intentions. They pointed out opportunities for expansion. And they celebrated what works, which I needed to hear.
So inspired was I, I immediately went to work on the story this afternoon. And after several exhilarating hours, I think this story is finally ready to be sent out in the world.
I'm left feeling immense gratitude for the sharp-sighted, generous, and exceptionally honest readers in this workshop. I'm left feeling glad that all those lame workshop attempts in the past didn't get me to a point where I swore them off altogether. I'm left excited to see what new work I'll get to read from them in August--and what work of theirs that you too will soon read, because these talented writers have a place out in literary land.
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